Now that I have finished my short chapter story, Lost in this World, I have copied and pasted it into Microsoft Word. Without breaks in the chapters, it was about 21 pages long which is a little disappointing. I plan to rewrite and edit the entire short story, so I would like some advice, tips, etc. Here are some simple questions that would help me make the story better. Thanks for the help!
What did you like?
What didn’t you like?
What did you understand clearly?
What didn’t you understand?
What needs more work?
What needs more detail?
Should I introduce that Shep is a dog at the beginning of the story?
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